MOMP #10: The Outsiders Journal #3 - Part 4. - by Chris Newton

**Streetz** · 03-09-2008, 11:17 PM

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Oblivion · 03-09-2008, 11:51 PM

I has a question: I've always thought that this tourney was Ons-Mir standard, so how is Duress legal? I mean, 8th Ed came out before Mirrodin, so Duress should have phased.

Ryuzaki · 03-09-2008, 11:58 PM

I still wonder if Tynion could have been a rich billionaire if he instead decided to sell cheap lunch meat with his friends...would he have ever come to MDV? Would he have stayed at all?! Who knows?!

Still a good story, I can't remember which part was my favorite though.

Syphon · 03-10-2008, 04:31 AM

Heh. You sound like some sports commenter in those last lines. "Who is the opponent, Pat?"

Mart83 · 03-10-2008, 05:01 AM

Captivating story, More! More!

-Mart

3nd3r · 03-10-2008, 08:07 AM

was interesting though there seems to be some mistakes here and there. overall a great and captivating read.

Barachem · 03-10-2008, 08:14 AM

Another solid installment.
It's good to see that you finally lose one round.
That makes it more tangible and real.
I need another, now.

Zaknifa · 03-10-2008, 09:57 AM

Good story and good hook. Makes me wish I could go to a tournament.

Tynion · 03-10-2008, 10:38 AM

It is quite possible that it was Blackmail instead of Duress... not sure. All those days of getting Duressed kind of blurs the mind as to when exactly it all was happening

Thank God Cabal Therapy had rotated by then.. nasty discard time period there...

FrycHiKn · 03-10-2008, 11:19 AM

It was a cute story...

Nice and keep the good job!

**Streetz** · 03-10-2008, 02:03 PM

Psst.. I actually remembered to use the Ctrl-I feature this time, Chris. Aren't you proud?

Tynion · 03-10-2008, 02:39 PM

I forgot to check it

Good job Streetz!

EpilepticCricket · 03-10-2008, 03:43 PM

I have thoroughly enjoyed all of the installments so far.

I can't wait to read the next one! Keep it up!

BurnBait · 03-10-2008, 06:24 PM

Yeah, this was pretty good. I notice a bit of "who is" instead of "who's", which makes it a little clunky at times, but since it's technically grammatically correct, I can't fault you for that. Nj.

Tynion · 03-12-2008, 05:01 PM

At this point I could just duck it and let the editors take the critique in the face LOL

03-09-2008, 11:51 PM	#2
Oblivion I Am Returned.Technically Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Kuala Lumpur, Malaysia Posts: 2,670	Re: MOMP #10: The Outsiders Journal #3 - Part 4. - by Chris Newton I has a question: I've always thought that this tourney was Ons-Mir standard, so how is Duress legal? I mean, 8th Ed came out before Mirrodin, so Duress should have phased.

03-10-2008, 04:31 AM	#4
Syphon Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 2,541	Re: MOMP #10: The Outsiders Journal #3 - Part 4. - by Chris Newton Heh. You sound like some sports commenter in those last lines. "Who is the opponent, Pat?"

03-10-2008, 05:01 AM	#5
Mart83 Elite Mage Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 320	Re: MOMP #10: The Outsiders Journal #3 - Part 4. - by Chris Newton Captivating story, More! More! -Mart

03-10-2008, 08:07 AM	#6
3nd3r Banned Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: somewhere between Hell and a Handbasket Posts: 1,327	Re: MOMP #10: The Outsiders Journal #3 - Part 4. - by Chris Newton was interesting though there seems to be some mistakes here and there. overall a great and captivating read.

03-10-2008, 08:14 AM	#7
Barachem Elite Mage Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 287	Re: MOMP #10: The Outsiders Journal #3 - Part 4. - by Chris Newton Another solid installment. It's good to see that you finally lose one round. That makes it more tangible and real. I need another, now.

03-09-2008, 11:17 PM	#1
Streetz ...figuring things out... MDV Owner Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Villa Park, IL Posts: 11,069 Blog Entries: 30	MOMP #10: The Outsiders Journal #3 - Part 4. - by Chris Newton This thread is reserved for the dicussion of the following article: http://www.magicdeckvortex.com/mdvarticle0356.htm Please read it, enjoy it and discuss it here. What did you like about the article? Was it inspiring, informational, ingenius? Was it inappropriate? Was there anything you really liked or didn't like about it? Let the author know here! Thanks! NOTE: This thread is posted before the article goes live. If the article isn't up yet, please check back later. __________________ Webmaster, Admin and Owner of Magic Deck Vortex and leader of the Forum [Wizards]. Join MDV's Facebook Page! or check out MDV's MySpace Page!! ...You can also find me on Twitter. Have cards to trade?**

03-09-2008, 11:58 PM	#3
Ryuzaki Are you without sin? Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 5,509 Blog Entries: 1	Re: MOMP #10: The Outsiders Journal #3 - Part 4. - by Chris Newton I still wonder if Tynion could have been a rich billionaire if he instead decided to sell cheap lunch meat with his friends...would he have ever come to MDV? Would he have stayed at all?! Who knows?! Still a good story, I can't remember which part was my favorite though. __________________ How harsh will my punishment be?

03-10-2008, 09:57 AM	#8
Zaknifa Conjurer Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Cold Lake Posts: 421	Re: MOMP #10: The Outsiders Journal #3 - Part 4. - by Chris Newton Good story and good hook. Makes me wish I could go to a tournament.

03-10-2008, 02:03 PM	#11
Streetz ...figuring things out... MDV Owner Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Villa Park, IL Posts: 11,069 Blog Entries: 30	Re: MOMP #10: The Outsiders Journal #3 - Part 4. - by Chris Newton Psst.. I actually remembered to use the Ctrl-I feature this time, Chris. Aren't you proud? __________________ Webmaster, Admin and Owner of Magic Deck Vortex and leader of the Forum [Wizards]. Join MDV's Facebook Page! or check out MDV's MySpace Page!! ...You can also find me on Twitter. Have cards to trade?

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